A couple of spelling/grammar/punctuation issues, but very engaging and I really want to hear more.
BUT, I'd like to see more backstory for each of the characters, and you'd do well to tighten up the scenes. Particularly the motivation for chucking him in the drink and the journey through the aforementioned drink, cause the closest I thing to a motive I could decipher was that they were drunk and didn't want him getting his girlfriend back from Michael, even though it doesn't seem like he needs to worry much about that.